This essay on the use of metaphors and the impact that they have in the medical field is very well written. I don’t have any big critiques for it at all, I think there were a few minor errors or organization issues but nothing huge that is detrimental to the essay or the argument. I love how specific your thesis is! I can very easily understand the argument and what they will be talking about throughout just based on the introduction. I think if anything, there were a few missed commas, or quotation marks in a few of the paragraphs. Again, nothing major just a few details which could help out the paper. The topic sentences are always great at introducing various points or the broad topics in each paragraph. Maybe one or two sentences that could be taken out or rearranged, but the flow of one topic to another is executed nearly perfectly! The quotes chosen as support for the arguments were great. Overall, the essay was very well written and organized. I really enjoyed reading and hearing about other opinions/arguments.
